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Author Note

26th Jan 2019, 6:14 PM edit | delete

HERE'S THE BEEF MISSELANEY

Anyway yeah this got a like 60% redraw in the last 3 hours rip
The last panel had a sort of very boring angle and 3 of these panels were missing so yeah, I added those
And a bunch of hands
why not
glad suit boy's enjoying himself



Comments

26th Jan 2019, 7:22 PM edit | delete | reply

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=idnwh6iDnXA


26th Jan 2019, 7:23 PM edit | delete | reply

WHAT AN ADVERT
10/10


28th Jan 2019, 2:37 PM edit | delete | reply

Drivers in New Orleans be like:


26th Jan 2019, 7:39 PM edit | delete | reply

I’m glad you took the time to redraw because this is some fine USDA certified BEEF right here. Not sure how it was before but as of now the last half of the page is a four hit combo of “oh fuck.” The hands look rad. Also I’m mad hyped to find out more about our ghost of medical malpractice past here. How the hell is he angry enough to bring down parts of a BUILDING? Wtf did our boys do?


26th Jan 2019, 8:07 PM edit | delete | reply

here's how it looked before! much tidier but also pretty stale I think

and sure he's angry but look at that face of unhinged glee 8D


26th Jan 2019, 8:43 PM edit | delete | reply

Ok wow ye this is much better. Old layout carries more of a “oh, he got his jacket wet” vibe as opposed to this one in which the threat of death seems very real


27th Jan 2019, 1:10 AM edit | delete | reply

"our ghost of medical malpractice past"

this moniker is everything


27th Jan 2019, 1:09 AM edit | delete | reply

The hands are a genius touch, so glad you added more in. It really conveys the claustrophobia of being boxed into an environment that someone else controls, and the implied manipulation is far more powerful than the outright punch in the old version.


27th Jan 2019, 7:16 PM edit | delete | reply

This.
Also, kinda makes you wonder whose story this really is. Dylan's or Psycho Ghost's.

The old version also ended MUCH sooner but I wonder if it still followed the exact same narrative? At least the way I got it was that in the old version Dylan seemed even more of a jackass and probably really murdered Jerry out of hate.
But ya. That is no longer important, is it? :D
Legacy issues :Y


27th Jan 2019, 7:38 PM edit | delete | reply

The old version kind of team out of plot where I stopped, I think I intended Dylan to go to the hospital but definitely not for this. There was also none of the Dylan seeing visions stuff planned until a short way into this version.


27th Jan 2019, 10:07 PM edit | delete | reply

I keep remembering Bolderousness' comment in the Bonfire arc:

[quote]"I just realized how this entire story is basically Dylan versus The Abstract Artistic Structure of the Comic, and I love it."[/quote]


30th Jan 2019, 6:56 PM edit | delete | reply

Once VR is totally a thing this is how it is going to feel for real when somebody or the author messes with your expectations or thoughts :D


27th Jan 2019, 7:33 PM edit | delete | reply

Thanks Jordan! I think the blue gutter instead of white helps the boxed in feeling too, I'm glad I changed it!


27th Jan 2019, 7:19 PM edit | delete | reply

Words but his grasp is too strong :<
Dylan, you are going to need a ghost to fight a ghost! If Psycho Ghost can do this then surely Jerry can interfere! Come on!

I THINK the he is using "prison" as blackmail at this point. One time he said he does not want Dylan to go there and in my opinion Dylan is his only way to accomplish what he wants. Throwing him in jail would play against him I would say. But it is a strong reason for Dylan to play along. Sure :/


27th Jan 2019, 7:32 PM edit | delete | reply

He says whatever he thinks is going to get to Dylan most. He claimed he wanted to go Dylan because that would mean making him do more bad things, now he's going hard on the fact that dylan can't actually fix anything :}


30th Jan 2019, 7:05 AM edit | delete | reply

I'm gonna be back here at 730 pst because I wake up and I fuckin manually TYPE IN je-re-my.webcomic.ws like a CHAMP on my cellphone from the bed

And I'm gonna be looking for that 85-15 chuck do you hear me


30th Jan 2019, 2:19 PM edit | delete | reply

AaaAAA BUT I DON'T GET HOME UNTIL THEN
It's gonna be like ten minutes after :'(


30th Jan 2019, 5:10 PM edit | delete | reply

*stares like an imperious housecat*

...acceptable



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