we're entering the scene that I had to keep rewriting, it's been so hard trying to balance the 'action' of this bit with the dialogue. don't wanna break the action, dn't want it to seem like jerry's just fine with the situation. let's see how it goes :S
Oh, I might not update o wednesday because that's boxing day and it seems a bit weird so I might do 2 pages next saturday instead
have a good holiday!
At this point, I don’t think Rob’s bro murdered Jerry, directly or otherwise. His actions, as chronicled, make a little more sense to me as retaliation for Rob’s murder and/or Dylan trying to frame Rob.
Likewise, I don’t think Corey saw what Dylan thinks he did. There’s little reason for him not to rat Dylan out if that were the case. By extension, he’s still my prime suspect for Robin’s murder.
Agree on both accounts.
Especially about Corey. In my opinion, Corey was about to admit that he thinks Rob killed Jerry (as Rob is still the prime suspect and it would logically make sense to a random witness like Corey) and... that he killed Rob afterwards and dumped him into the sever. Or simply killed him.
While I do find that awkward there are only maybe two things Corey wanted to say and this one makes more sense? And Corey looks like the guy who would admit that in Jerry's name no matter how bad it would sound for him.
@wooster
I tend to think dylan never got his nose treated because he didn't want to be a bother while his mum was ill, though that was only mentioned in the first version I think? But it probably makes more sense for him to have done cuz it would've hurt like stink :p
How many people are still left who are not annoyed by Dylan's tendencies at this point? Haha :D
As skillful as he is at avoiding the inevitable.
Ghost Jerry being as straightforward as Suit Jerry right now. Seriously. Suit Jerry was a jerk but he barely lied to Dylan. Sit down with your ghost brother and settle most of it. He deserves it.
haha the only reason now that dylan's not talking to him abut it is... that was slowing down the pacing too much. I was going to have a proper conversation happen here but just plot-wise it felt wrong, far too slow. So you can blame me for this one and not dylan ;D
Okay! They did talk a bit already anyway. That makes me think... Jerry has no clue whatsoever what could have caused all of this, right? No clue about how he acted and what Dylan felt back then. I mentioned previously that murder is no excuse but perhaps Jerry also needs to give it some thought... :D
Jerry, it looks like you're the only one who can stop Dylan at this point, unless Corey is lucky. The fact that Dylan is already openly saying that he has to "get rid" of Corey lends a lot more creedence to the notion that he really did kill his brother. It could still be a delusion, but as far as I can tell, this means that Dylan is certain that he killed Jerry and that he will do anything to avoid capture. If he's not a killer now, he certainly plans to be one, and that increases the odds that he's done it before.
Here's hoping that someone can stop Dylan before he does something irreversible.
Jerry is dead, and it certainly seems likely that Dylan is responsible for it, but we don't really know it for sure yet, because there are no reliable witnesses, not even Dylan himself.
Author Note
Moth
we're entering the scene that I had to keep rewriting, it's been so hard trying to balance the 'action' of this bit with the dialogue. don't wanna break the action, dn't want it to seem like jerry's just fine with the situation. let's see how it goes :S
Oh, I might not update o wednesday because that's boxing day and it seems a bit weird so I might do 2 pages next saturday instead
have a good holiday!
Comments
Wooster
Hmm…
At this point, I don’t think Rob’s bro murdered Jerry, directly or otherwise. His actions, as chronicled, make a little more sense to me as retaliation for Rob’s murder and/or Dylan trying to frame Rob.
Likewise, I don’t think Corey saw what Dylan thinks he did. There’s little reason for him not to rat Dylan out if that were the case. By extension, he’s still my prime suspect for Robin’s murder.
MadJak91
Agree on both accounts.
Especially about Corey. In my opinion, Corey was about to admit that he thinks Rob killed Jerry (as Rob is still the prime suspect and it would logically make sense to a random witness like Corey) and... that he killed Rob afterwards and dumped him into the sever. Or simply killed him.
While I do find that awkward there are only maybe two things Corey wanted to say and this one makes more sense? And Corey looks like the guy who would admit that in Jerry's name no matter how bad it would sound for him.
junoro
Sneaky Dylan, trying to run away from being called a psycho who killed his own brother
Moth
if he runs fast enough the words won't be able to catch up with his ears
Omar
I wonder if Dylan remembers the man from the hospital...maybe there was more to that scene than was shown....
Wooster
It’s not unreasonable. Dylan was likely treated for his bloody nose there—where people died who shouldn’t have. Makes you think wonder.
Omar
hmmm...more business for the funeral parlour ....
Moth
they're all in on it together to drum up business
Moth
@wooster
I tend to think dylan never got his nose treated because he didn't want to be a bother while his mum was ill, though that was only mentioned in the first version I think? But it probably makes more sense for him to have done cuz it would've hurt like stink :p
MadJak91
How many people are still left who are not annoyed by Dylan's tendencies at this point? Haha :D
As skillful as he is at avoiding the inevitable.
Ghost Jerry being as straightforward as Suit Jerry right now. Seriously. Suit Jerry was a jerk but he barely lied to Dylan. Sit down with your ghost brother and settle most of it. He deserves it.
Moth
haha the only reason now that dylan's not talking to him abut it is... that was slowing down the pacing too much. I was going to have a proper conversation happen here but just plot-wise it felt wrong, far too slow. So you can blame me for this one and not dylan ;D
MadJak91
Okay! They did talk a bit already anyway. That makes me think... Jerry has no clue whatsoever what could have caused all of this, right? No clue about how he acted and what Dylan felt back then. I mentioned previously that murder is no excuse but perhaps Jerry also needs to give it some thought... :D
Thracecius
Jerry, it looks like you're the only one who can stop Dylan at this point, unless Corey is lucky. The fact that Dylan is already openly saying that he has to "get rid" of Corey lends a lot more creedence to the notion that he really did kill his brother. It could still be a delusion, but as far as I can tell, this means that Dylan is certain that he killed Jerry and that he will do anything to avoid capture. If he's not a killer now, he certainly plans to be one, and that increases the odds that he's done it before.
Here's hoping that someone can stop Dylan before he does something irreversible.
hi123
too late, he killed his brother.
Thracecius
Jerry is dead, and it certainly seems likely that Dylan is responsible for it, but we don't really know it for sure yet, because there are no reliable witnesses, not even Dylan himself.