DYLAN: Sorry, dad- Just Dylan.
JAMES: Oh, I- thought he might be back. I’m sorry, did I wake you up? Sorry. You haven’t… haven’t seen your brother, have you?
DYLAN: No, Dad.
JAMES: It’s just he’s not in his room, so… I guess he’s still out. Anyway, I think I’m going to take a nap. If he calls you, you let me know.
[He won’t call.]
JAMES: And when he gets back, wake me up.
[He’s not coming back.]
DYLAN: Sure, Dad.
JAMES: Oh, I- thought he might be back. I’m sorry, did I wake you up? Sorry. You haven’t… haven’t seen your brother, have you?
DYLAN: No, Dad.
JAMES: It’s just he’s not in his room, so… I guess he’s still out. Anyway, I think I’m going to take a nap. If he calls you, you let me know.
[He won’t call.]
JAMES: And when he gets back, wake me up.
[He’s not coming back.]
DYLAN: Sure, Dad.
Author Note
Moth
You know when there's a page that just won't look good no matter what you do and eventually you're just like eh
good enough
Not sure if I'll carry on with wed-sat updates or go for weekly instead, we'll see how I burn through me buffer
Comments
revzet
Awwwwwwkward
Moth
yeeeeup.
joeyballast
The more I hear the more I realize that "meh... good enough" is the mantra of many professional artists and illustrators. Sometimes stuff just doesn't turn out the way we want.
Looks fine to me.
Moth
It's so easy for things to not quiiite match up to the way you visualised them. But at least nobody else knows how you visualised them :P
joeyballast
If they DID know how it was supposed to turn out we'd ALL be screwed. All of us.
Haegan2005
This looks beautiful. The care and effort that you have taken shows!
Moth
Aa thank you :D
So I managed to hide my underlying laziness this time heheHaegan2005
:D
MadJak91
I think this is more of a darker beginning :O
Welp. He has time until morning...
Moth
Only a couple of hours...
I tried to make the whole thing a bit darker this time >:) only a bit.
azureXtwilight
I love the beginning of this more than the last one, keep it up!
Moth
The original beginning had zero planning, so I'm glad this one seems better :')
Wooster
"Sorry. Did I wake you up?"
Does… does Dylan typically sleep in the bathroom?