whew 16 panels! an average page is 7 I think
Anyway, this is kid of a strange page, this and the last one I had planned as a single page because I wanted it to be very quick, almost like all of Malachy's 'life' flashing before dylan's eyes, so it's a little messy and vague? idk, it has a fun pink gradient
I guess that's why he was still interested in keeping Dylan out of jail. He's probably the only connection to the outside world he has left. Even if he blames him for his death and maybe Robin's too.
Messing with Dylan is one of very few pastimes he's had, I don't know if he actually wanted to keep Dylan out of jail as much as he just wanted to taunt him with the things he could make him do.
Ah man. Guy really just wanted a decent life for himself and his brother. Now neither of them will ever get that.
The way the red tint gets more prominent with Mal’s anger is a really cool touch. Gives that emotion a lot of gravity >:) And those Ghost Eyes on Dyl in the last panel are incredibly unnerving. He is one of the few living characters we have left and he is not allowed to have those
Ooo, good call. Had you done that it probably wouldn’t have looked like Dylan was even in there anymore. This way definitely gives off more of a vibe that he’s seeing Mal’s past
He has a cannula in his arm though, I can't look at that D:
I'm deathly afraid of injections and honestly I would rather spend my eternity completely naked than with a needle somewhere in my body
hehe good job! Are you doing two pages a week now? I thought I would've had only one to read but there were two!
Also, gotta have feels for the 'bad guy'. I like when it's not actually that there is 'bad' and 'good', there are just things that happen and make people do stuff. Dylan is far from being all nice, and even though that guy wasn't really sweet back when he was alive, we still have feels for him, life didn't seem easy, and dying like that-- hah... Everything went the wrong way. That's life. But wait, I know this isn't life, it's you Moth!! You're the one behind all that. OOO: omg
Yeah I like the morally grey characters :D I like Malachy quite a lot, he's a fun character. And truly, I am the only evil mastermind in this story :')
I am not buying "like" because this is more like revenge and punishment to such characters but sure, I guess the point can be the simple fact that you have that power and they cannot do anything about it.
Buuut I still think you hate them ;D
What a freaking ridiculous situation to be in. You suddenly learn that your brother deliberately caused this guy's death and he has been haunting your since thinking you did it which culminated in you killing your brother. Yet again, it happened because of Jerry and Jerry now completely lost his "you murderer" card as well. What is worse, it killed other people as well like Robin.
What a crapshow. If Dylan immediately blocks off his mind, drops on the ground like vegetable and spends the rest of his life in some institution in the corner happily counting ants then I will cry but understand.
But it is not going to be that "easy", is it?
Can this get any worse? [Y/n] _
Possession definitely sucks. I think Dylan needs to torch that place and tell Jerry to stop being a giant horse's arse who's always getting him into trouble. :P
Amazing color theme and layout/transition! It may have been a ridiculous amount of work, but it came together well. :)
Author Note
Moth
whew 16 panels! an average page is 7 I think
Anyway, this is kid of a strange page, this and the last one I had planned as a single page because I wanted it to be very quick, almost like all of Malachy's 'life' flashing before dylan's eyes, so it's a little messy and vague? idk, it has a fun pink gradient
Comments
harajuku_Smittle_
oooo psychedelic!
Moth
time for PINK 8D
Guest
:/ That's sad
It looks to me like he confused Dylan and Jerry.
I guess that's why he was still interested in keeping Dylan out of jail. He's probably the only connection to the outside world he has left. Even if he blames him for his death and maybe Robin's too.
Moth
Messing with Dylan is one of very few pastimes he's had, I don't know if he actually wanted to keep Dylan out of jail as much as he just wanted to taunt him with the things he could make him do.
griffsketch
Ah man. Guy really just wanted a decent life for himself and his brother. Now neither of them will ever get that.
The way the red tint gets more prominent with Mal’s anger is a really cool touch. Gives that emotion a lot of gravity >:) And those Ghost Eyes on Dyl in the last panel are incredibly unnerving. He is one of the few living characters we have left and he is not allowed to have those
Moth
I think his ambition and determination in life is what kind of warped into his drive for revenge in death :}
I almost made Dylan's eyes malachy-blue as well, but that looked a bit too much like he'd been full-on possessed.
griffsketch
Ooo, good call. Had you done that it probably wouldn’t have looked like Dylan was even in there anymore. This way definitely gives off more of a vibe that he’s seeing Mal’s past
Wooster
The black eye was from Jerry, but what's that dark coloration on the opposite side of Robin?
Moth
He hit his head, something knocked him out before he drowned
BooImAGhost
i would be mad too if i had to wear a hospital gown for the rest of eternity :\\\ his butt will never know warmth again
Moth
my one mercy to malachy is giving him loose trousers instead of a buttless dress
OhHeyItsMe
He has a cannula in his arm though, I can't look at that D:
I'm deathly afraid of injections and honestly I would rather spend my eternity completely naked than with a needle somewhere in my body
Moth
Yeah, I feel that, I'm a great big needle-phobe as well
NoiV
hehe good job! Are you doing two pages a week now? I thought I would've had only one to read but there were two!
Also, gotta have feels for the 'bad guy'. I like when it's not actually that there is 'bad' and 'good', there are just things that happen and make people do stuff. Dylan is far from being all nice, and even though that guy wasn't really sweet back when he was alive, we still have feels for him, life didn't seem easy, and dying like that-- hah... Everything went the wrong way. That's life. But wait, I know this isn't life, it's you Moth!! You're the one behind all that. OOO: omg
Moth
Yeah, it's every wednesday and saturday!
Yeah I like the morally grey characters :D I like Malachy quite a lot, he's a fun character. And truly, I am the only evil mastermind in this story :')
MadJak91
I am not buying "like" because this is more like revenge and punishment to such characters but sure, I guess the point can be the simple fact that you have that power and they cannot do anything about it.
Buuut I still think you hate them ;D
Moth
Hey when they suffer, I feel bad for them, I like em more! Also I secretly do lots of doodles of them being happy
MadJak91
What a freaking ridiculous situation to be in. You suddenly learn that your brother deliberately caused this guy's death and he has been haunting your since thinking you did it which culminated in you killing your brother. Yet again, it happened because of Jerry and Jerry now completely lost his "you murderer" card as well. What is worse, it killed other people as well like Robin.
What a crapshow. If Dylan immediately blocks off his mind, drops on the ground like vegetable and spends the rest of his life in some institution in the corner happily counting ants then I will cry but understand.
But it is not going to be that "easy", is it?
Can this get any worse? [Y/n] _
Moth
It could surely get worse, but AS WE KNOW, I like my characters ;D so I'm sure they're gonna be fine :D
This is all going to make it a very strange conversation when Jerry and Dylan finally try to talk things through!
The Doodler
The NHS doesn't cover psychopomps? Shame, guys, shame.
Moth
It is always hailed as the great failure of the nhs
Thracecius
Possession definitely sucks. I think Dylan needs to torch that place and tell Jerry to stop being a giant horse's arse who's always getting him into trouble. :P
Amazing color theme and layout/transition! It may have been a ridiculous amount of work, but it came together well. :)
Moth
Well, I guess Jerry can't really get him into too much trouble any more :¬) maybe if he keeps distracting him or something
Thank you!! I worked on it over a long time so it didn't seem too tough.
ratt
oy yo
Moth
this is just one comment, v disappointed