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Author Note

2nd Mar 2019, 3:29 PM edit | delete

I'm sorry if you thought Jerry was gonna make a valiant argument for dylan,,

he's terrible with words.



Comments

2nd Mar 2019, 4:05 PM edit | delete | reply

Oh lord Jesus this top round steak here is getting compelling

But shit wait so if Malcom somehow goes away isn't Jerry released

Lord


2nd Mar 2019, 4:18 PM edit | delete | reply

Goddamn it I meant malachy but my PHONE is an unappreciative autocorrecter


2nd Mar 2019, 4:24 PM edit | delete | reply

Hahaha
MMy hpone always corrects it to Malachi : (
Malachy's saying if Dylan dies, Jerry will be released cuz he's got nothing to haunt!


2nd Mar 2019, 4:28 PM edit | delete | reply

Dear Malachy,

You may be distracting the twins with your game for now, but I can see what you're trying to do behind their back with that board on the ceiling, which - this a coincidence, I'm sure of it - happens to be placed directly above Dylan's head.
Please don't try anything funny c:

With regards,
Me.


2nd Mar 2019, 4:30 PM edit | delete | reply

It's such a NICE location for an exposed beam, really complements the broken curtain thing ;)
(even if it weren't exposed, he'd still break the beam above his head, but i couldn't figure out a good way to draw that)


4th Mar 2019, 5:12 PM edit | delete | reply

Didn't even see it until you pointed it out. Bitch thought he was so slick


2nd Mar 2019, 4:50 PM edit | delete | reply

If I could eat popcorn while reading webcomics, without it being a mess, I'd be chowing down right now because this drama is A+


2nd Mar 2019, 5:04 PM edit | delete | reply

Thank you, thank you, I hope you enjoy your hypothetical popcorn


2nd Mar 2019, 5:43 PM edit | delete | reply

A valiant argument it is not, but HA! The ghosts CAN touch each other! I was definitely hoping for this, now Jerry’s fiery temper can get him into trouble on the other side of the veil as well. And it looks like he caught Malachy a bit off guard - I’m guessing no one’s been able to touch the guy in ten years.

This whole string of updates has been so tense and suspenseful, the anticipation is gonna give me a nosebleed. A++ stuff right here


2nd Mar 2019, 6:17 PM edit | delete | reply

Are ye hoping for a classic Jerry Punch in the Face? it is the only way he knows how to settle conflict.
Yeah, Malachy probably doesn't know what to make of being grabbed, there's a bit of weird joy and a bit of panic haha

And thank you! These last 2 chapters I think have been the best in that regard, I'm pretty happy with them :D


3rd Mar 2019, 2:02 AM edit | delete | reply

Ohno...looks like this building was condemned for a reason (the beam!!).
This scene is so tense!


6th Mar 2019, 3:19 PM edit | delete | reply

that beam? that's just decorative, no structural integrity problems here at all!


3rd Mar 2019, 6:53 PM edit | delete | reply

I have an academical question I would like to see answered but chances are it is going to happen so that is cool.
How does it feel to b-slap a ghost? Has to be pretty satisfying.
I sure look forward to some badass ghost ass busting :D

You know what would be a slap in the face though? If Jerry later decided to kill Dylan because better you are in my world than me vanishing from this one. It would be the act of ultimate jackjerryassery -_-
For now it is just Mal-nipulation and you know... "What is a ghost? A miserable little pile of secrets! But enough talk! Have at you!"


6th Mar 2019, 3:18 PM edit | delete | reply

Is Jerry that much of an arse? He's definitely more likely to let something bad happen to dylan out of just being angry than actually wanting him also to be a ghost

But a bitch slap soundsmuch more like his kinda thing :D


4th Mar 2019, 1:08 AM edit | delete | reply

tune in next time for a battle royal between three! ghosts!

but seriously, so compelling!! the pink tones make the scene tense and also feels like a storm's brewing. a bad bad storm


6th Mar 2019, 3:15 PM edit | delete | reply

Three ghosts? You banking on dylan not making it? ;D



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