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Author Note

4th Sep 2019, 5:18 PM edit | delete

chris
does not shut up



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4th Sep 2019, 5:29 PM edit | delete | reply

Ooh, responsible! (And/or wanting to avoid more ghosts.)


4th Sep 2019, 5:46 PM edit | delete | reply

The adventures of the Scooby Gang would have ended rather quickly (and in police custody) if the had called themselves the Spicy Hot Crime Team...


4th Sep 2019, 5:52 PM edit | delete | reply

I think Chris might still suspect they are just going to play some sort of prank or have a nice camp fire in a spooky hospital like little kid explorers.
This does call for much heavier equipment. DO IT!


4th Sep 2019, 6:46 PM edit | delete | reply

I’m glad Chris doesn’t shut up, every line of his is an absolute banger

Now we wait for Corey to show up, bring the gasoline and the prophecy of the comic’s banner to be fulfilled


4th Sep 2019, 6:49 PM edit | delete | reply

Well, I recently checked how many years of prison you can get for an arson and it turns out that an arson with casualties (as in burning block of flats or something) is a completely different crime than devastating an old, abandonded building soo... good for Dylan? And for Jerry, I can't imagine our poor ghost boy sitting in a cell for years without any means to do stuff.


4th Sep 2019, 7:09 PM edit | delete | reply

Yeah my idea here was that basically since the building was meant to be destroyed anyway and the police in this story are a bit ineffectual/busy with the murder and missing boy that they won't really care too much about the hospital burning down >_>


4th Sep 2019, 9:17 PM edit | delete | reply

SPICY HOT CRIME TEAM


5th Sep 2019, 7:44 AM edit | delete | reply

Chris: Maybe we can just talk about your issues?
Dylan: ARSON IS THE ONLY OPTION


5th Sep 2019, 9:00 AM edit | delete | reply

Chris: Oh well better make a team name then


6th Sep 2019, 6:41 PM edit | delete | reply

Well, it's a good thing Chris has the good manners and presence of mind to introduce himself to Eden, because clearly Dylan has a one track mind, and it isn't on the cute redheaded girl, as it would be for any normal teenage boy.

I sure hope Chris and Eden make it out of this adventure alive.

Oh, and Dylan too. ;)



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