I'm gonna redraw last weeks page. It went rather funky. Speaking of redraws, if you want to see the redrawn first chapter, it's going on tapastic where it's called Raining Knives. I'll leave the old pages alone here for now
Wait, you're redrawing it again? D: How come? The art is wonderful, really. But I totally understand that if you aren't happy, it doesn't matter how great we think it is. Gotta have that sense of personal success :)
As for this page, maybe he can play it off as "hey, you have superpowers now?" >.>
I've redrawn the old style pages because I'd like to print out some copies for some of my friends and I'd like the style to be consistent for them :P And the previous page because I rushed it a ton ^^;
Gotta side with Dylan because dead do not just come back but... He is taking it better than I thought! For someone who is hella guilty :D
"Listen, Jerry... I killed you a few weeks back. Always wanted a spectral bro."
Nah but I am liking this more subtle shock on his part :>
Author Note
Moth
alternatively,
I'm gonna redraw last weeks page. It went rather funky. Speaking of redraws, if you want to see the redrawn first chapter, it's going on tapastic where it's called Raining Knives. I'll leave the old pages alone here for now
Have a nice weekend!
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Bobblit
Oh yeah, please don't take down the old pages, I think they're great.
Also I showed this comic to my partner (who isn't very into comics) and he really liked it!
Moth
Yeah, I'm gonna leave them up, I've decided I've gotta try and be more proud of the work I've already done haha
Wow, really? Ahh that's awesome :D
joeyballast
Dude. So much redrawing... It's not a bad thing. If anything I'm impressed at the amount of work you're doing. So much work...
Also, my vote is for the alternate panel one.
Moth
Ah I guess I just like redrawing things waaay too much and ain't nothing ever good enough :<
M, this story would be a lot simpler if everyone just wrote down exactly what was going on on each others' hands.
Proxy170
Wait, you're redrawing it again? D: How come? The art is wonderful, really. But I totally understand that if you aren't happy, it doesn't matter how great we think it is. Gotta have that sense of personal success :)
As for this page, maybe he can play it off as "hey, you have superpowers now?" >.>
Moth
I've redrawn the old style pages because I'd like to print out some copies for some of my friends and I'd like the style to be consistent for them :P And the previous page because I rushed it a ton ^^;
Ohh, Jerry is for sure hoping it's super powers!
MadJak91
Gotta side with Dylan because dead do not just come back but... He is taking it better than I thought! For someone who is hella guilty :D
"Listen, Jerry... I killed you a few weeks back. Always wanted a spectral bro."
Nah but I am liking this more subtle shock on his part :>
Moth
If there was one thing Dylan definitely wanted, it was his brother to be forced to follow him around. for ever.
Yeah, Dylan hasn't yelled anything yet! I'm proud of him. Though he is hiding behind a tree...