I can't help but imagine the girl in the funeral parlour standing at the window, watching as Dylan scrambles amongst the gravestones gesturing wildly and arguing with thin air.
Awesome page, by the way. That graveyard would be one hell of a place to play hide and seek. All the graveyards where I live are wiiiiiiiiide open. Having a forest graveyard would be badass.
Well, at least Dylan has a really good excuse. Anyone would react similarly disturbed if they family member returned from the dead.
He does not even have to tell him what happened. Just that he died and it is a psychological bad joke...
Just because you seem like a perfectionist, I thought I'd point out that I read the first two word bubbles as Jeremy's in the upper left, then Dylan's "You're not real" right below it. Not sure if you meant it that way?
And if you want me to shut up with the feedback and just enjoy the story with non-critical comments, please let me know, I certainly won't be offended! And I will continue to love the story, as always ^_^
That outta the way, man I wonder how Jeremy's gonna react :O
Author Note
Moth
At last, Dylan! That wasn't so hard, was it?
Comments
joeyballast
I can't help but imagine the girl in the funeral parlour standing at the window, watching as Dylan scrambles amongst the gravestones gesturing wildly and arguing with thin air.
Awesome page, by the way. That graveyard would be one hell of a place to play hide and seek. All the graveyards where I live are wiiiiiiiiide open. Having a forest graveyard would be badass.
Moth
Haha, yep! At least he's partly hidden by the trees and... at least she already knows he's kind of a weird one.
The only graveyards I've been in have been totally tree'd. More foresty than this one!
Bobblit
"I'm pretty sure I just figured out teleportation"...
I feel sorry for Jerry, but this - this is a very funny reaction to being dead.
MadJak91
Well, at least Dylan has a really good excuse. Anyone would react similarly disturbed if they family member returned from the dead.
He does not even have to tell him what happened. Just that he died and it is a psychological bad joke...
Proxy170
Just because you seem like a perfectionist, I thought I'd point out that I read the first two word bubbles as Jeremy's in the upper left, then Dylan's "You're not real" right below it. Not sure if you meant it that way?
And if you want me to shut up with the feedback and just enjoy the story with non-critical comments, please let me know, I certainly won't be offended! And I will continue to love the story, as always ^_^
That outta the way, man I wonder how Jeremy's gonna react :O
Moth
Oh yeah, it's supposed to be that order! Takes a while for Jerry to actually realise what Dylan said.
No, I don't mind feedback! Things like that are useful, thank you :>
He may just end up even more confused, poor boy.