Y'know, you've done something quite interesting here, by showing us Jeremy through Dylan's eyes at first, which makes him not sympathetic or appealing. But now we're actually getting to meet him and judge him for ourselves, and with him in such a sad an vulnerable state (that last panel!) the sympathy roles seem to be reversing a bit...
I feel like this could be all avoided by simply telling him the harsh insane truth that he killed him...
Nobody else (probably) can see Jerry so maybe he would drop it out of grief and the fact that his bro killed him. Nah. Not that easy plus you never know. Gotta keep the deed secret!
Author Note
Moth
Jerry, you're really bad at being dead.
oof sorry for being slack on replies, I've been distracted by stuff
4 more pages of this chapter :¬)
Comments
Bobblit
Augh, Jerry putting his fingers into his forehead made my delicate stomach cringe a bit xD
And yes, Jerry is bad at being dead
Moth
Yeah, that bit's kinda gross :P Jerry is also supposed to have a slight fear of blood, so it just gets better for him!
trad118
Oh-
I
feel as ill as he looks
It's not a very nice way to find out that you're dead
Moth
Hmm, and he still doesn't even quite believe it :<
Proxy170
Y'know, you've done something quite interesting here, by showing us Jeremy through Dylan's eyes at first, which makes him not sympathetic or appealing. But now we're actually getting to meet him and judge him for ourselves, and with him in such a sad an vulnerable state (that last panel!) the sympathy roles seem to be reversing a bit...
Moth
I feel like everyone likes Jerry at first, but the thing is he's only really nice when he's scared
Let's see if I can yoyo those sympathy roles about a bit >:)
joeyballast
Aw, man. Last panel gives me all the feels. Looks so forlorn as Dylan walks away.
Moth
Ah, he'll be fine! He can take care of himself. probably.
MadJak91
I feel like this could be all avoided by simply telling him the harsh insane truth that he killed him...
Nobody else (probably) can see Jerry so maybe he would drop it out of grief and the fact that his bro killed him. Nah. Not that easy plus you never know. Gotta keep the deed secret!
Moth
At this rate, Jerry probably wouldn't believe that either. Or give Dylan a real nasty haunting, once he gets used to the whole being a ghost thing.
The Doodler
The skull panel made me cringe, aaaugh.
Moth
Hehe, well I aim to please :P